Friday, 27 March 2015

First Draft/Evaluation

This is the first draft of the thriller opening. As you can see it is not completely finished, but wanted to show the audience a quick look to see there views. As its the very first it was not the best, there were many errors. During the filming, there where many scenes that needed to be cut out as we did something wrong and didn't film correctly. But this is just a quick summary of what it will look like.





This is what im going to talk about we are going to include to the finished thriller.

Build up
A small clip of the thug switching the switch, and another scene where you see where the hostage is hep when the light appears, you will see foot steps walking down the stairs and stepping on glass.

Violent part
A scene where the thug pulls the hostage around the room and water boards him. This torture's the hostage and shows the thugs in control.

Non-linear narrative
This is when the flash back comes in place and shows what happens before, we are going to add the thugs partner watching a deal go past where we will use eye line match.











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